Tuesday Critique: Enter

This is a little peek at my Nanowrimo novel, entitled Enter.  Hope you enjoy.  Feel free to let me know what you think in the comments.  🙂 When the sun rises on my night’s vigil, I know I am not alone.  It doesn’t matter that Ethan is sleeping in his rumpled bed across the tiny,… Continue reading Tuesday Critique: Enter


Tuesday Critique

Here's an excerpt from Slumber for anyone to read, enjoy, cut up as you see fit.  🙂 “Benjamin has come to speak with us about your betrothal,” Father said with a heavy sigh.   “I hope you told him, as I did, that there is nothing to be done.” “We did,” Mother said.  “But he will hear… Continue reading Tuesday Critique