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Tuesday Critique: Being Brave

Here's another excerpt from my Nanowrimo 2013 novel, Enter.  In this piece, Eliora and Ethan discuss being brave.  As always, please feel free to share your honest thoughts on it! 🙂 “Do you have any idea how fascinating you are to me?”  I blink.  Now it’s my turn to blush.    “I mean, I have… Continue reading Tuesday Critique: Being Brave

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Tuesday Critique: Astra and her Mother-in-Law

We've all heard of the overbearing mother-in-law.  Imagine if you were a queen and your mother-in-law was queen before you.  This is my picture of how it would go, taken from my Nanowrimo 2013 novel, Enter.  As always, please feel free to let me know what you think. Atossa did not wait until Astra’s visit,… Continue reading Tuesday Critique: Astra and her Mother-in-Law

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Tuesday Critique: Eliora Arrives at the Harem

In this second excerpt from my Nanowrimo novel, Enter, the main character Eliora arrives in the harem of King Xerxes in Susa.  Please feel free to let me know what you think.  🙂 The first glimpse of a future home is always fraught with meaning.  Which room would be mine?  What would become my new… Continue reading Tuesday Critique: Eliora Arrives at the Harem