This is a little peek at my Nanowrimo novel, entitled Enter. Hope you enjoy. Feel free to let me know what you think in the comments. 🙂 When the sun rises on my night’s vigil, I know I am not alone. It doesn’t matter that Ethan is sleeping in his rumpled bed across the tiny,… Continue reading Tuesday Critique: Enter
Tag: Slumber
Tuesday Critique
Here's an excerpt from Slumber for anyone to read, enjoy, cut up as you see fit. 🙂 “Benjamin has come to speak with us about your betrothal,” Father said with a heavy sigh. “I hope you told him, as I did, that there is nothing to be done.” “We did,” Mother said. “But he will hear… Continue reading Tuesday Critique
Critique Tuesday: Eliora’s betrothal
Here is the opening scene from my first draft of a young adult novel called Slumber. Please pick it apart and let me know what you think. 🙂 It was not at all unusual for a girl to balk at her prospective groom. After all, it was rarely her choice, even if she was not… Continue reading Critique Tuesday: Eliora’s betrothal
Erin E. M. Hatton 